(and just when she was finally cleaning up her act too)
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I hope you enjoyed the first few pages. As a writer always willing to edit it would help me to know which parts of these critical first pages 'grabbed you', which bored you or if any part dragged or disappointed. Don't be too afraid or too polite to be honest people, thou shalt not lie.
Unfortunately technical issues have cropped up again and may delay the next installment. I'll try to get it sorted out this weekend so I can post the next few pages on Monday.
-NO PROMISES; after all I am not actually... (you know)